I see where there are a few spots where the brightness went off gamut but sometimes a broken rule can be very effective. In this case if anything a little narrower depth of field from a bit longer focal length might have offer you a choice where the contrast might have been a bit lower and the surrounding area would have become softer giving you some additional options for mood without compromising the subject. But there are as many ifs as there are artists so it becomes irrelevant while the work you did will always be the cause of any other ideas born of it, like this one! They are all children of your creation!!! Thanks for inspiring me!!!!